There is a trophy called "The Fetechist." I believe that it should probably read "The Fetishist," in that the French word "fe'tiche" is English "Fetish" and hence "Fetishist" I could be mistaken on the derivation though, in which case it ought to be something else. Fetechist is not a recognizable word in English

Yep that's a "lost in translation" mistake. Thanks!
Changed.

The card [card]Lightning Chain[/card] should probably be "Chain Lightning." Lightning Chain (which I've never seen in a Fantasy genre) would be a chain with the quality of being made of Lightning (i.e., a physical chain that maybe shocked something that touched it), whereas Chain Lightning (an Incredibly common spell in almost every fantasy game ever) would be a lightning bolt with the quality of "chaining" (from the verb chain rather than the noun chain)
Lightning chain is a reference to Saint Seiya (les chevaliers du zodiaque in France), the Adromeda Knight shouts "Nebula chain" when using his signature move, of course this is slightly different as the card refers to lightning. This release was accompanied by Crystal storm and many others, all these are references to SAINT SEIYA , you can see this in the illustrations but also the title of the card.
[card]Crystal Storm[/card] http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1262/ataxr8.jpg
Diamond dust or Aurora thunder Attack ,I think his master used Crystal storm.
[card]Lightning Chain[/card] http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9 … Z6LsQOBwMA Nebula Chain!

In the flavor text of [card]Mano on Mano[/card], American numbers seperate the thousands digit from the rest by use of a comma, so "1,102.31131" rather than "1 102.31131." Also, "pounds" should be "pound" in so far as it modifies "war guemelite" and is not changed for being itself modified by a number. Ditto on the second occurence of pound. And this isn't a criticism, but in America at least, I've never seen the phrase Mano on Mano. I always see either the untranslated Latin "Mano e Mano" or a translated English "Man on Man
Thanks for this information concerning the numbers, "Mano e Mano" it will be .

there's actually a huge load of references to saint seya, llike hares' armor or shell...

lol

Lyquid · 28-05-2011 09:34:28

Card: FIERCE LION

There is a line there that states:
CHAIN: TRACKER

Then below is this text:
"Chain if this character is a tracker."

I think it's a bit redundant to state that. Maybe it should be taken out instead?

Dantesan · 30-05-2011 14:58:09

Indeed, I will change it It actually wasn't suppose to be there, this is an old trace of an older description build.

Thanks!

Lyquid · 18-06-2011 13:11:43

Card: TSURO

Text: "Order: 1, 3, 5 etc..:

Is Tsuro the only one with the term "ORDER" in his text? Other cards use the term "Turn".

alisaneko · 22-06-2011 19:10:22

the text on silikat :turns 4 and more /silikat/"deals an additional attack that equals *his* printed min attack" when shes clearly a female or a guy with some nice breasts....

Glasher · 23-06-2011 01:57:23

Acrobatic Dodge

Defense = X where X equals the character, Defense -3 if your character has more than one class.

Where X = the characters what?
Level?
Spirit?
Attack?
Number of Cards in hand?
Number of cards discarded?

I haven't had a chance to play it yet but its missing what X is lol.

Dantesan · 27-06-2011 08:14:36

Hello guys.

Changed a few words on recent cards and corrected a few typos.

Please let me know if you see any more.

Thanks again for your feedback!

Lyquid · 29-06-2011 11:36:07

Card: "THE EXPATRIATE"

Text: "...opponent alive characters"

I think that should had been "...opponent's alive characters"

Dernière modification par Lyquid (29-06-2011 11:36:37)

Dantesan · 29-06-2011 13:13:04

Lyquid a écrit :

Card: "THE EXPATRIATE"
Text: "...opponent alive characters"
I think that should had been "...opponent's alive characters"

Hey there,

Thanks!

I was planning on changing the wording on this card.

This is the version I came up up with:

If the opposing character does not share any Race with the other opposing living characters, he has Attack -2, Defense = 0 and Spirit -2.

Lyquid · 29-06-2011 13:59:52

Much better!

Lyquid · 03-07-2011 00:44:51

Card: TORAN THE REGENT
Upgrades: 3 and 4

Wrong Text: "+1 againt Mages"

I think that should had been "against"

Dantesan · 04-07-2011 07:48:34

Card: TORAN THE REGENT
Upgrades: 3 and 4
Wrong Text: "+1 againt Mages"
I think that should had been "against" smile

Exactly, thanks!

MrLordi92 · 07-07-2011 22:25:38

Nomad Trophy III (Both in trophy room and the slide-out menu for trophies) Says I have to win 10 games with a Nomad deck while the actual number is 25.

Dantesan · 08-07-2011 09:38:27

Corrected, thanks!

Roarky · 14-07-2011 09:29:01

What about the new trophy "Extinction"

It said: "If your character dies, all active cards in play played by the opposing character since the start of the game are discarded"

Is it working on all kind of cards? or only cards that was attached to my characters?

I tried it with DK as my opponent (he had Dragon Armor and Draconian Sword attached), it supposed to remove these I guess from the wording? (they both active since they give bonus to the characters)...

Thoughts anyone?

Dernière modification par Roarky (14-07-2011 09:29:13)

EwokDan · 14-07-2011 09:45:17

removes any cards played by your opponent...not all cards played by opposing characters

Avka · 14-07-2011 09:56:16

http://forum.eredan.com/viewtopic.php?id=24943
The text on the Volk's Curse is not correct.

Dantesan · 15-07-2011 08:33:22

removes any cards played by your opponent...not all cards played by opposing characters

This Roarky.

and concerning "Volk's Curse"

It is now:

The opposing character has Attack -1 and Defense -1 for each other living opposing Human.

it is a literal translation, just added the "other" which I forget, apologies.

Thanks

Avka · 15-07-2011 10:34:42

Minor fixes:
[card]Blessed Bandage[/card] (as compared to [card]Camp[/card]) has extra "+".
[card]Espionage[/card] is missing the word "Spirit".
[card]Extinction[/card] has "since the the start".
[card]Life Devourer[/card] "his opposing character" instead of "the opposing character"
[card]Moira the Witchblade[/card] does not specify the fact that the other girl has to be on your side, not just "in play and alive"
[card]Shadow Idol[/card]. Double text about chain.
[card]Storm[/card]. Deal to OR inflict on. Not "deal on".
[card]The Monster[/card]. "Still in play" means "alive", like on all other cards ^^
[card]This Tomb...[/card]. "suffers 3 direct damage".

Nurvus · 15-07-2011 14:36:53

[card]Zarazam's Eye[/card]
"If the opposing character is a Warrior, he has Defense -1 and
youi character gains Defense +1."

Dernière modification par Nurvus (15-07-2011 14:40:02)

Dantesan · 15-07-2011 17:37:04

Avka a écrit :

Minor fixes:
[card]Blessed Bandage[/card] (as compared to [card]Camp[/card]) has extra "+".
[card]Espionage[/card] is missing the word "Spirit".
[card]Extinction[/card] has "since the the start".
[card]Life Devourer[/card] "his opposing character" instead of "the opposing character"
[card]Moira the Witchblade[/card] does not specify the fact that the other girl has to be on your side, not just "in play and alive"
[card]Shadow Idol[/card]. Double text about chain.
[card]Storm[/card]. Deal to OR inflict on. Not "deal on".
[card]The Monster[/card]. "Still in play" means "alive", like on all other cards ^^
[card]This Tomb...[/card]. "suffers 3 direct damage".

Hello,

I have corrected those silly typos and mistakes, thanks for that!

Concerning Moira the Witchblade

I always meant to change that wording, thanks a lot for reminding me.

"in play and alive" is no more as it wasn't precise enough. (for quite a few cards actually)

Instead you will get: "Defense + 1 if "Eglantyne the Witchblade" is one of your characters and alive. "

I've kept the same wording for all similar cards ('Gakyusha, Iro, Aerouant, Bomzar, Faceless ect...). Hope this is clearer

Zarazam's Eye
"If the opposing character is a Warrior, he has Defense -1 and
youi character gains Defense +1."

Changed that, thanks!

Thank you very much for your feedback guys

Nurvus · 15-07-2011 21:41:20

Something minor, but if you are looking for text consistency, alot of cards display multiple order bonuses as "A and B" while others display "A,B"

The examples I can point out are:
- Kounok the Prophet Upgrade 3 - "Spirit +1,Attack +1."
- Golemarlok Upgrade 4: "Spirit +1, Attack +1."

Most/All the other multiple bonus orders, including other upgrades of Kounok and Kounok the Prophet display it in this manner: "Spirit +1 and Attack +1." or "Spirit +1, Attack +1 and Defense +1." wich I also think is more correct.

Dernière modification par Nurvus (15-07-2011 21:44:29)

EwokDan · 16-07-2011 11:36:03

Karasu Kage Lvl 1. Turn bonus states ' Spirit +1n. Not Spirit +1

jackal19 · 16-07-2011 11:47:43

Vileness
Common. Spell. Nehantist.

Choose a card in the opponent's Discard Pile, this card is then placed in your Deck, one of your active cards determined at random along with the card "Villainy"" are removed from the game. Your character suffers 2 direct damage.

is this a typo or a future card?

Dernière modification par jackal19 (16-07-2011 11:48:07)

Dantesan · 17-07-2011 01:43:18

jackal19 a écrit :

Vileness
Common. Spell. Nehantist.
Choose a card in the opponent's Discard Pile, this card is then placed in your Deck, one of your active cards determined at random along with the card "Villainy"" are removed from the game. Your character suffers 2 direct damage.
is this a typo or a future card?

Oh dear, that's a mistake on my part, Vileness was originally called villainy but was changed at the last minute, my bad!

It is indeed "Vileness". Been changed!

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