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Dantesan

Solarian

Inscription : 27-01-2010

Messages : 788

Re : Wrong Text

Hi there, indeed there is a problem with wording, I've changed it to this (on a few cards actually)

Thanks again!

If the opposing character deals physical damage to your character this turn, he will suffer 2 direct damage at the end of the fight.

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steven_allen

Solarian

Inscription : 28-08-2010

Messages : 665

Re : Wrong Text

This isn't really a wrong text issue as it is a wrong definition issue.  Thunder magic and Thunder Guemelites would be more properly called Lightning magic and guems really.  Thunder is the sound, lightning is the energy.

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Dantesan

Solarian

Inscription : 27-01-2010

Messages : 788

Re : Wrong Text

Hey steven,

You're absolutely right, it's changed!

Thunder is now lightning, this goes for Lightning Guemelites, Lightning spells ect..

Apologies for the confusion.

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LenardCzar

Habitant de Guem

Inscription : 18-12-2010

Messages : 158

Re : Wrong Text

And why is it wrong?

because it only says +1/0 not attack +1/0... i hope it makes sense now...

Dracan

Campeur

Inscription : 16-11-2010

Messages : 56

Re : Wrong Text

Warrior buffing Bloodsword says "your OTHER warriors gain +1 attack" She's not a warrior, don't need the word Other.

Narwhal Should prolly say something about omitting your normal attack

MikeyB

Habitant de Guem

Inscription : 03-12-2010

Messages : 179

Re : Wrong Text

MikeyB, thanks a lot for this.

Aez King of Avalonia level 3.

Indeed, the description was missing this:

"Your other Mercenaries gain Defense +1."

I think it got lost during last text change.

Thanks again.

excellent....that one had me confused on a few fights hahaha. thanks.

skinnyeddie

Habitant de Guem

Inscription : 05-12-2010

Messages : 111

Re : Wrong Text

Just noticed this today.
Foam Giant 3's flavor text says: Legends says that the Foam Giant beholds mysterious secrets and treasures.

If it's more than one Legend, then use say. If there is just one Legend, then use says. Personally, I would suggest using the phrase, "Legend has it..." instead.

Behold means to look at. Holds would be appropriate.

Dernière modification par skinnyeddie (06-02-2011 13:43:33)

Dantesan

Solarian

Inscription : 27-01-2010

Messages : 788

Re : Wrong Text

Warrior buffing Bloodsword says "your OTHER warriors gain +1 attack" She's not a warrior, don't need the word Other.

Narwhal Should prolly say something about omitting your normal attack

The text is word for word identical to the french one. This must be reported in the bug section if she is not supoposed to be a warrior. The term "OTHER" is used quite a few times on a few cards to clearly distinguish the "other" characters from the one you are currently playing.

Just noticed this today.
Foam Giant 3's flavor text says: Legends says that the Foam Giant beholds mysterious secrets and treasures.

If it's more than one Legend, then use say. If there is just one Legend, then use says. Personally, I would suggest using the phrase, "Legend has it..." instead.

Behold means to look at. Holds would be appropriate.

Ok thanks ^^

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pekpekkypek

Habitant de Guem

Inscription : 22-09-2010

Messages : 293

Re : Wrong Text

Bomzar's game text is entirely in italics.

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Dantesan

Solarian

Inscription : 27-01-2010

Messages : 788

Re : Wrong Text

Bomzar's game text is entirely in italics.

Well I can see that the flavor text is in italic but that's it, the rest of the text is normal.

What evolution pek?

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bleachman

Gardien

Inscription : 06-09-2010

Messages : 1 362

Re : Wrong Text

When you sell cards, it gives you an option to invert your selection. This is in French though.

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Samsari

Banni(e)

Lieu : Argentina

Inscription : 27-11-2010

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Re : Wrong Text

Little typo. It should be it's hard to believe.

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Gabriel_Caetano

Guémélite

Lieu : Dublin - Ireland

Inscription : 12-11-2010

Messages : 456

Re : Wrong Text

http://static.eredan.com/cards/web_big/us/TA0HEtc7.png

Little typo. It should be it's hard to believe.

maybe the`re meant to say "bla bla bla, `tis hard to believe", in a kind of slangy way
but in that case, it`s missing the " ` " signal.

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bleachman

Gardien

Inscription : 06-09-2010

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Re : Wrong Text

http://static.eredan.com/cards/web_big/us/TA0HEtc7.png

Little typo. It should be it's hard to believe.

maybe the`re meant to say "bla bla bla, `tis hard to believe", in a kind of slangy way
but in that case, it`s missing the " ` " signal.

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Tis = it is

Its a strange development of those two words, as when you speak them fast, it sounds like 'tis'.

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Banni(e)

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Oh, it's slang. English is not my first language so I'm not very into it =P

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Gabriel_Caetano

Guémélite

Lieu : Dublin - Ireland

Inscription : 12-11-2010

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Re : Wrong Text

Oh, it's slang. English is not my first language so I'm not very into it =P

ain`t mine either but i listen a lot to bob dylan...

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Breezy414

Habitant de Guem

Inscription : 14-09-2010

Messages : 230

Re : Wrong Text

[card]Ammunition Box[/card]

the Italics part is messed up.  For got the other < before the I>.  Doesn't show it from the example for some reason but looking at a card in game right now and it says "I> A Pirate ammunition box is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're going to get"

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Dantesan

Solarian

Inscription : 27-01-2010

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Yep Breezy, working on it as we speak

'tis = it is
'tisn't
'twas
'twill

Old-fashioned, poetic.

"Tis common in Shakespearean langage"

and used in Ireland also, other parts as well.

But perhaps you are right, it might not be relevant for kounok lol, might change it when I have the time

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LenardCzar

Habitant de Guem

Inscription : 18-12-2010

Messages : 158

Re : Wrong Text

i noticed that spiritspeaker's sex says inconu... it will also be better if the word sex will be changed to gender...

Dantesan

Solarian

Inscription : 27-01-2010

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Re : Wrong Text

i noticed that spiritspeaker's sex says inconu... it will also be better if the word sex will be changed to gender...

Here is an explanation between the terms sex and gender:

http://www.med.monash.edu.au/gendermed/ … ender.html

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LenardCzar

Habitant de Guem

Inscription : 18-12-2010

Messages : 158

Re : Wrong Text

i see.... well, thanks for the explanation... i will never be confused by it... ^^,

JarodG64

Eredanien

Lieu : Parcourant les terres de Guem

Inscription : 30-10-2009

Messages : 5 231

Re : Wrong Text

The filter in my collection says "Other Castes" instead of "Other Cards".

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Dantesan

Solarian

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Re : Wrong Text

woups, yes indeed, changed!

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skaspels

Voyageur

Inscription : 29-12-2010

Messages : 24

Re : Wrong Text

As much as I appreciate the difference between the words 'sex' and 'gender', keep in mind that this isn't an academic paper or a conference; common American usage, from the lowest to the highest government offices, is to use 'gender' instead of 'sex' even where 'sex' is appropriate - see Merriam Webster's dictionary entry for 'gender', especially the examples.

Although the specificity of language is blurred by this usage, the point of being a translator is to make colloquial and understandable text, not academically correct language.

skaspels

Voyageur

Inscription : 29-12-2010

Messages : 24

Re : Wrong Text

Furthermore, the Regent trophy award has a typo either in the text or in the selection bar - the text says '10 games' but the bar indicates 15.