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Dantesan · 16-06-2010 13:35:30

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Sycamore · 16-06-2010 14:21:05

# Wierd bandana / Dubioses Band / Bandeau louche
-> Weird bandana

# Frozen Prophety / # Frozen Prophety / Prophétie glaciale
-> Frozen Prophecy

# Mirrow of illusions / Illusionsspiegel / Miroir des Illusions
-> Mirror of illusions

# Iosis's Scroll / Iosis-Pergament / Parchemin Iosis
-> Iosis' Scroll

# Marintis's Feather / Marintis-Feder / Plume Marintis
-> Marintis' Feather

# Perle necklace / Perlenkette / Collier de perle
-> Pearl necklace

# Poisened scimitar / Vergiftetes Scimitar / Cimeterre empoisonné
-> Poisoned scimitar

And in the very minors details :

# Red feather / Rote Feder / Plume rouge
-> Red Feather (all the other feathers of the set have a majuscule)

EDIT: CORRECTED

Dernière modification par Sycamore (16-06-2010 14:21:39)

Sycamore · 16-06-2010 14:24:34

And in the techniques, « Sabre glacial » (Freezing Saber or something like that) was translated as « Frozen Saber » (Sabre glacé).

EDIT: CORRECTED

Allizze · 16-06-2010 21:49:51

Sycamore a écrit :

# Iosis's Scroll
-> Iosis' Scroll
# Marintis's Feather
-> Marintis' Feather

Those versions ( ...s's) are correct, too. It just looks weird ^^

Sycamore · 16-06-2010 23:09:28

I did not know that. I looks weird to me too in any case ^^

If there is time to correct this even though it is not a spelling error, the other version would be more correct and look better, I think

Dernière modification par Sycamore (16-06-2010 23:09:38)

vampirez · 17-06-2010 01:11:25

It won't look better and more correct because then it won't be English.

Dantesan · 17-06-2010 09:45:25

The 's is correct but in the case where the word finishes with s and a "z" sound , Sycamore is right. I changed it ^^

Thanks for your great help guys.

Sycamore · 29-06-2010 06:13:42

In the Armory, « Main défense » is not translated.

« Aelimas's Mask » -> « Aelimas' Mask »
« Aelimas's Scroll » -> « Aelimas' Scroll »

« Yses's Armory » -> « Yses' Armory »
« Yses's Witchcraft » -> « Yses' Witchcraft »
« Yses's Saber » -> « Yses' Saber »
« Yses's Cold Blood » -> « Yses' Cold Blood »
« Yses's Scepter » -> « Yses' Scepter »

« Oeil scrutateur » (watching eye or something like that) is translated by « Wicked eye » (Mauvais oeil).

« Cache croix » is translated by « Hidden Cross » (Croix cachée).

« Corrupted Follower » set :
- Every object keep the upper case for "follower" from the Followers set except the follower's initials.
- In both sets every object has an upper case except the initials.

- Followers -> Corrupted Follower
Follower's Boots -> Corrupted Follower's Boots
Follower's Knife -> Corrupted Follower's Knife
Follower's Coat -> Corrupted Follower's Coat
Worshiper's Mask -> Corrupted Worshiper's Mask
Follower's Protection -> Corrupted Follower's Protection
Follower's initials -> Corrupted follower's initials

Besides, the common set is named « Followers », plural, while it is singular in the names of the objects (except for the boots in French, but that looks like an error, and they never seem to be corrected) and in the name and objects names of the Fee'z version. It is like this in French too, but singular may look less weird inn both French and English.

Edit : Ah, I see the errors reported before were corrected

EDIT: CORRECTED

Sycamore · 07-07-2010 00:25:32

The items « Écharpe de Borksdale » and « Foulard Borksdale » are both translated by « Borksdale's Scarf » (which can be very confusing), while the former means « scarf » and the latter « stole », and neither « shawl » as I read somewhere in the forum.

EDIT: CORRECTED

Dernière modification par Sycamore (07-07-2010 00:26:06)

Sycamore · 16-07-2010 21:09:39

« Epée fendue » (dented or cracked sword), with the missing accent on the E, is translated as « bent sword » (épée courbée, tordue).

« Baton long » (still with the missing accent on the a, I do hope they correct them one day) is translated as « Long baton », which seems a little odd. Perhaps « long staff » be better?

There is also a problem with the pointy boots : two objects with the same English and French name as well as the same picture. Were it not for the German translation which is different for each, I would have thought the object had been modified, thus the two versions of the stats, element, level and cost... And even so, I still had to look at every single boots in the armory to find them in order to be sure that there were two objects, for only one of them is at the blacksmith's shop at my level -_-

Bottes cornues
   + Statistiques :
   + Compétences : Chaussures Ombre    +11 Bonus    +3 For    +1 Int    +4 Vit    +3 Esq
   + Prérequis : Level 12
   + Obtenu :
   + Forgeron : 1810 Cx (Level 12 à >12)
   + Requis :
   + Set : Aucun

Bottes cornues
   + Statistiques :
   + Compétences : Chaussures Glace    +25 Bonus    +4 For    +4 Déf    +4 Adr    +4 Int    +4 Vit    +5 Esq
   + Prérequis : Level 30
   + Obtenu :
   + Forgeron : 5670 Cx (Level ? à ?)
   + Requis :
   + Set : Aucun

EDIT: ALL THE ABOVE HAS BEEN CORRECTED. FOR THE POINTY BOOTS , THE WEAKER VERSION (STATS WISE) WILL KEEP THE NAME, THE SECOND ONE (CLEARLY SHOWS SUPERIOR STATS) IS NOW CALLED GREAT POINTY BOOTS , THANKS A LOT FOR YOUR HELP.

Dernière modification par Sycamore (16-07-2010 21:11:55)

Sycamore · 19-07-2010 14:03:32

« Sur les traces de la corruption 1 », « Sur les traces de la corruption 2 », and I guess the following quests too, are not translated in English.

EDIT: CORRECTED

Sycamore · 19-07-2010 15:35:03

« Récolte pour la nation » : Idem.

EDIT: CORRECTED

Sycamore · 19-07-2010 18:57:09

« Pelgrin's stick » ( FR : « Bâton de pèlerin ») -> « Pilgrim's staff » (I don't think stick is appropriate in this case).

EDIT: CORRECTED (and lol to the Pilgrim's stick)

Sycamore · 24-07-2010 02:33:56

Melicia armor (FR: Armure de milicien) -> Militia armor
Civilian's boots (FR: Bottes de citoyen) -> Citizen's boots

EDIT: CORRECTED

Dantesan · 26-07-2010 15:56:56

Hello all, after checking some old text, I decided to change "The followers" into "the Worshippers". More relevant and it sounds better.

Expect more changes and corrections in the upcoming weeks.

Of course, you will be the first to know.

Thanks in advance.

Sycamore · 29-07-2010 15:22:21

« Monstre de la semaine : Akujin rouge » is translated as « Monster of the week :Red Akujin », which except for the colon seems fine, but « Monstre de la semaine : Akujin » is also translated as « Monster of the week :Red Akujin ».

EDIT:CORRECTED

Dernière modification par Sycamore (29-07-2010 15:22:40)

Sycamore · 27-09-2010 04:13:20

« Bllod Merchant » -> « Blood Merchant » (Monster)

Dernière modification par Sycamore (27-09-2010 04:13:51)

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#1 16-06-2010 13:35:30

Mistakes and translation errors.

#2 16-06-2010 14:21:05

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